Hey Jim

How’s the FSBOHelp.com pre-sell video doing?

My feedback on your video - too much dialogue running without a ‘brain breather’.

You know how you promote the importance of Bullet Points on a Mini-Site.

Well, I have been trained (radio advertising) to believe that an audio sell requires ‘brain-breathers’(like Bullet Points) built into the verbal delivery.

The penalty for omitting these mini breaks in any streaming audio or verbal script is that the listeners brain ends up feeling like it is ‘running out of breath’.

That means the listener stops concentrating on the message and instead focusses on the delivery. Not good.

That’s how I felt when listening to the audio of this video.

Michael Searles
Back on Track

It’s good and here’s why…

1) it does make me sick to pea away money

2) I ask my self can I do it? Alone???

3) since the dawn of time individuals have been handed the keys to the puzzle to unlocked the doors to the
T-Chest…

4) your product is the knowledge and that is the missing piece to my puzzle…

Feed back -

I am not alone when i purchase this product

I am worthy to except the money, because i took the chance
and invested and said yes to the secret piece of the puzzle

I don’t feel sick any more because i am not alone and I have
the piece to the puzzle

Its easy to once you have the piece to the puzzle